Wednesday, May 25, 2022

Sonnet 141 By William Shakespeare


 

Discussion
The theme of “Sonnet 141” is the battle between the poetic persona's wits and his heart. In the Shakespearean as well as Renaissance context, wits were associated with reason making it masculine while the heart was associated with irrationality making it feminine.  As in many of the Sonnets on the Dark Lady, in “Sonnet 141”, too, the poet's relationship with the Dark Lady is based on an irrational infatuation, rather than intellectual stimulation as in his relationship with the young man. Interestingly, as explained in Sonnet 130, it is not even physical beauty in the accepted sense of the period that drew the poetic persona to the so-called Dark Lady.

Hence, the poetic persona constantly rebelled against the attraction he felt for a woman who according to him had “enthralled” him and “unmanned” him in more than one way. It must be noted that this outlook is very much in keeping with the classical view on male-male and male-female relationships that was in vogue during the Renaissance. According to Greco-Roman philosophy it was only men who were capable of having relationships based on deep understanding and intellectuality; therefore, only males could be friends of equal stature. Male-female relations, on the other hand, were mainly for physical release and to carry on the family name. However, one must take such views with a pinch of salt as it is a well-documented fact that some of the most famous men of antiquity such as Pericles of Athens had had both physical and intellectual relations with women.

In Shakespeare’s work, the Dark Lady Sonnets deal with a baser or more earthly form of human sexuality. Some see Shakespeare's Dark Lady Sonnets as an ironic response to Petrarchan sonnets in which an ideal female subject is glorified. According to Shakespeare-specialist Katherine Duncan-Jones, Shakespeare in the Dark Lady Sonnets, "[i]nstead of exploring the subtle and complex effect on the speaker of an obsession with a chaste and high-born lady who can never be possessed physically, offer[s] backhanded praise of a manifestly non-aristocratic woman who is neither young, beautiful, intelligent nor chaste, but… provides a perfectly adequate outlet for male desire. 127-[1]52" However, in my view, this conclusion does not explain the emotional turmoil the poet experiences at his inability to resist the lure of the woman he is attracted to.

In faith, I do not love thee with mine eyes,

For they in thee a thousand errors note;

But 'tis my heart that loves what they despise,

Who in despite of view is pleased to dote;


In the first quatrain of “Sonnet 141” the poet says that it is not what his eyes behold that makes him love the woman he is attracted to, for his eyes, which are under the purview of his reason, have noted “thousand errors” in the woman.  He is perplexed by the fact that his heart insists on loving the woman in spite of the fact that his eyes “despise” her. His heart rebels against his “five wits” and “five senses” in desiring or loving the woman – so his attraction is completely irrational. There is a note of bewilderment when he says “But 'tis my heart that loves what they despise” in the third line. Through the use of synecdoche in allocating heart and eyes independent will, the poet distances himself from the unfolding drama so that he could documents the battle. The need for distance signals confusion he is feeling due to his predicament. Moreover, in documenting his predicament by standing outside Shakespeare illustrates the unique ability artists have to explore intensely personal experiences through their art.  The word "errors" in line two, which is an example of pun on words, refers to both her physical faults as well as moral slips born of her promiscuity.

Nor are mine ears with thy tongue's tune delighted,

Nor tender feeling, to base touches prone,

Nor taste, nor smell, desire to be invited

To any sensual feast with thee alone:


In the second quatrain, continuing along in the same vein, the phrase "base touches" in line six suggests sleazy sexual encounters. The poetic persona says that he finds no joy in the woman’s voice. This could be a reference either to the harshness or the bossiness of the woman’s voice or her inability to sing. The ability to sing beautifully was a much valued female accomplishment at a time when people had very few modes of entertainment.

Next, he says that the woman’s touch did not generate tender or loving feelings in him due to his certain knowledge that that he was not the only person to receive them. The poetic persona knew that the woman was unfaithful to him. Continuing in the same vein, the poetic persona says that his other two senses, the sense of taste and the sense of smell, too, do not find anything remarkable in the woman which would explain his obsession with her. Still his heart desires her.

Repetition of “nor” and the use of parallelism – reiterates his state of mind. Frequent use of commas mark the man pausing frequently to contemplate on the issue


But my five wits nor my five senses can

Dissuade one foolish heart from serving thee,

Who leaves unsway'd the likeness of a man,

Thy proud hearts slave and vassal wretch to be:


In the third quatrain, the rational part of him, his wits[7] and senses that are governed by his brain, are overruled by his irrational heart which insists on “serving” the woman. Once again the term “serving” has more than one meaning. One may serve a woman in the sense the knights in Courtly Love Poems served highborn ladies or one may also serve her sexually as in a stallion serving a mare in heat. If the second meaning were to be applied to the context, it would capture the man’s state of mind better. The woman with her loose morals could very well be described as a mare in heat; in such a context, males like the poetic persona in her vicinity would not be able to resist her. The poetic persona is aware of the situation; yet, he loves her and desires her and that “leaves [him] unsway'd the likeness of a man”. The term “unsway’d” refers to the continuous attempt of his five senses and the wits to sway or persuade the man’s heart to give up the woman. “Sway” also refers to authority or power. Of course, the heart cannot be persuaded so the man is left a mere powerless shell of a man. The poet loves a woman against his better judgment. He is aware of all of her physical, moral and intellectual flaws, does not enjoy her voice, smell, taste or touch, but his wits and senses cannot prevent him from loving her. As a result the poetic persona becomes a “slave and wretch” to the woman’s whims and fancies.

T.G. Tucker points out in his edition of The Sonnets of Shakespeare, "leaves unsway’d' means … his heart that becomes the vassal of hers, while he becomes the mere 'likeness of a man'" (221). Interestingly, Shakespeare in Sonnets 57-8 professed to have become a slave to the Fair Youth without feeling his manhood “unsway’d”.


Only my plague thus far I count my gain,

That she that makes me sin awards me pain.


Commenting on the often misunderstood final couplet, Stephen Booth writes, "The basis of the conceit here is the idea of a soul's term of imprisonment in purgatory". The "pain" of the last line could be both mental and physical. The poet may have contracted a venereal disease from his mistress. Clearly, the lady in question does not make him happy; therefore, the only thing he gains from the relationship is a lot of pain. And he masochistically delights in the pain she inflicts on him out of lack of judgment and self-worth. According to Samuel Butler the last couplet means Shakespeare believes that he shall suffer less for his sin hereafter for he had received some of the punishment that was due to him as soon as the offense was carried out.
 


[1] His heart is irrational
[2] The eyes
[3] The heart
[4] In private/ only her
[5] the mental faculties of common sense, imagination, fantasy, instinct, and memory
[6] The Renaissance was a period that venerated rationality over feelings
 

Sunday, May 22, 2022

Farewell to Barn and Stack and Tree - A E Houseman


 

“Farewell to Barn and Stack and Tree” was composed by the English scholar/poet Alfred Edward Houseman (1859-1936). It appeared in the collection A Shropshire Lad which explores the lives of the youth in that area. The title of the poem is the first line of the poem itself. The poem is a pastoral lyric that can be set to music and sung. In addition, it contains a personal experience. The poem has 6 quatrains rhyming abab cdcd efef ghgh ijij klkl. The tone of the poem is very sad. The entire poem is in the form of a monologue. 

In the first stanza, the poet is bidding farewell to things that defined him and therefore were dear to him: the barn, the stack and the tree. Without these things to give meaning to his life, the man becomes a nobody or a man without an identity. By repeating the word “and” the poet adds a sense of deliberateness to the actions of the poetic persona. He is taking his time in taking leave from things that were important to him. A barn is the heart of a farm. It is where machinery, farm vehicles, grain and hay are stored. The stack is a short form for the hay stack which signals the poetic persona’s familiarity with it. It is essential for the continuation of the farm animals in the winter. The tree stands for all the trees one might encounter in the farm.  In the second line the poetic persona is saying goodbye to a possible childhood haunt: the Severan shore. In the third line the poetic persona is inviting someone called Terrence to look at him for the last time. Terrence could be a friend. At the same time Terrence was a name used frequently in both Greco-Roman and English pastoral poems. The poetic persona is asking his friend to look at him for the last time. The reason for the strange request was that he was not going to come home for Terrance to see him thereafter.

“Farewell to barn and stack and tree,                       
Farewell to Severn shore.                                         
Terence, look your last at me,
For I come home no more.

In the second quatrain, the poetic persona takes his attention off his friend in order to provide the reader an explanation for his earlier cryptic/enigmatic comment about not coming home. His eyes move to the very edge of his farm where he had been working mowing the hill for hay with his brother Maurice. Now the time is close to mid-day but the hill is only “half-mown”. This statement generates suspense. The reader would want to know why the work is half done. The poetic voice is reluctant to give the answer directly; so, he procrastinates getting to the point by saying “[b]y now the blood is dried”. This ominous statement suggests foul-play – something bad had happened. In the second half of the stanza the poet gives further details: “And Maurice among the hay lies still”. The term “lies still” is euphemism. Instead of revealing the unpleasant truth that Maurice is dead or more to the point murdered, the poetic persona says that he is lying still. Still he is unable to make a full confession. Instead of saying that he had killed his brother by stabbing him, the voice just says “[a]nd my knife is in his [Maurice’s] side”.  The image of his brother lying dead “amongst the hay” is branded onto his brain so that he could easily visualize it. So, by leaving the village he might be able to evade authorities but his troubled mind would never be at peace.      

“The sun burns on the half-mown hill, 5
By now the blood is dried;
And Maurice amongst the hay lies still
And my knife is in his side.

Next, he imagines how the tragedy would affect their mother. He says that his mother assumed that they were still working as it was harvest time - a busy time for farmers. The next two lines generate a lot of pathos: “She had two sons at rising day/ To-night she’ll be alone”. At sunrise she was happy mother of two strapping young men. Her future was assures. As a result of his action, his mother whom he calls “[m]y mother” would be childless and destitute. Hers would be a lonely life form then onwards as suggested by the use of the term “alone”.

 
“My mother thinks us long away;
,Tis time the field were mown. 10
She had two sons at rising day,
To-night she’ll be alone.

In the fourth stanza, the poetic persona is extending his hand to his friend to shake. The hands of the poetic persona may actually be bloody or it could be a reference to the intense feeling of guilt he is experiencing as a result of his sinful deed. The sadness he feels at this point is expressed by the phrase “And oh, man, here’s goodbye” – he is overcome emotions. Once again he looks at his hand which held the knife that killed his brother. He talks to it. He says his bloody hands and he would “sweat no more on scythe and rake”. For a farmer to be cut off from farming and farm would be virtual death. In this quatrain the poetic persona uses the phrase “bloody hand” twice. It suggests that no matter what he did he could not take his mind off the crime he had committed.    


“And here’s
a bloody hand to shake,
And oh, man, here’s good-bye;
We’ll sweat no more on scythe and rake, 15
My bloody hands and I.

At this point, the poetic voice is aware of the magnitude of his loss. He has lost his farm, his occupation, his mother, his only brother, his friends (Terrance), familiar sights (Severen), and things that made him happy (racing). More than anything else, he is going to lose his name as a fugitive. However, he is generous in his wishes for his friend Terrance. He wishes Terrance’s strength unlike his own would bring him only pride. He has used his own strength to kill his brother. Fratricide – killing of siblings – brings shame. Secondly, he wishes his friend would find love that would keep him clean. His own love, on the other hand, seemed to have been the reason behind the killing of his brother. Therefore, his own love is tainted by suspicion and fratricide. Lastly, he wishes that Terrance would win the race held on the village green during Lammastide. This seems to be the height of village life which he would not be a part of from that day onwards.

  
“I wish you strength to bring you pride,
And a love to keep you clean,
And I wish you luck, come Lammastide,
At racing on the green. 20

At the point of departure, the poetic persona is yet again thinking of the things he would have to leave behind: the hayrick, the fold and the empty plate. He imagines the hayrick waiting for him to come back loaded with a fresh supply of hay for the farm animals to eat in the winter. As he is going to run, away the task is not going to be completed. Consequently, there is a good chance that the farm animals would starve in the winter. Next, he thinks of the sheep that they must have let out to graze in the morning. In the evening, the fold would be waiting for the sheep to be brought back which is not going to happen. Left on their own in the pasture, the sheep would fall prey to predators or others farmers may lay claim to them. Either ways, his mother is not going to see them. Sheep represent food and clothing on a farm and without them his mother would suffer greatly. He sees his empty plate on the table which his mother filled for him every day. Evening meals were time of good cheer and warmth. He would not be able to experience those feelings ever again. Not only that, he imagines his mother waiting for his brother and him to come home until dinner turns cold. The rick, the fold and the plate are waiting – this is an example for the use of pathetic fallacy (giving human qualities to an inanimate object.)     


“Long for me the rick will wait,
And long will wait the fold,
And long will stand the empty plate,
And dinner will be cold.”

1.     What are the four things the poetic persona is saying farewell to in the first stanza of the poem?

2.     Who does he invite to have a last look at him?

3.     What is the time of the day? Support your answer with a quote from the poem.

4.     What had happened to Maurice?

5.     What is the poetic voice’s role in Maurice’s fate?

6.     What does their mother think her two sons were doing?

7.     What tragedy awaits her at the end of the day?

8.     Why does the poetic persona call his hand a “bloody hand”?

9.     What kind of feeling is generated by the line “And oh, man, here’s a good bye”?

10.            Who are referred to by “We” in the fourth stanza?

11.            What are the three things the poetic persona wishes for Terrance?

12.            Why does he wish Terrence would have:

a.     Strength that would bring him pride?

b.     Love that would keep him clean?

c.      Luck that would allow him to win the race at Lammastide?

13.            What are the three things that would wait for him in the last stanza? Why would they be waiting for him?

14.            Summarize the poem in your own words. Use 90-100 words.

 

Wednesday, May 18, 2022

Ode to a Nightingale - by John Keats

 


 

Biographical sketch of Johan Keats

Keats belonged to the 2nd generation of Romantic poets made of Keats, Shelley and Byron; the 1st was made of Wordsworth and Coleridge. He was born in Moorgate, London in 1795 and died in Italy in1821 at the age of 25 from tuberculosis.

His private life was full of sadness for two main reasons: death of his brother Tom from TB and his unsuccessful love affair with Fanny Browne. Transience of life was an issue that worried him from the very beginning. After meeting Leigh Hunt, an editor and a close friend of Shelley and Byron, Keats was encouraged to write poetry. At the age of 21 he produced his first great poem. In 1819, from January to September Keats produced a set of odes which has ensured his immortality:

1.      Ode to Autumn

2.      Ode to a Nightingale

3.      Ode on a Grecian Urn

4.      Ode to Psyche

5.      Ode to Melancholy

6.      Ode to Indolence   

 Ode to a Nightingale – John Keats

An autobiographical poem composed while Keats was dying of tuberculosis. Three things stand out in the odd:

1.      Keats’ evaluation of life – life is full of tears and frustrations in contrasts the joyous immortality of the nightingale

2.      Keats’ wishes that he could die and be rid of the physical body that gives him so much pain both physically and emotionally. Keats was a very active sensuous man in his prime and to be so helpless all of a sudden and to be reminded daily of his mortality would have been a terrible experience. On top of that, the idea that he had not so far written anything that would ensure the continuation of his memory after his death would have saddened him.   

3.      The power of imagination. He wishes to escape the pain and mortality of his existence by flying away with the bird and be one with ‘viewless wings’ of poetry.

Form

o   Ten-line verse of varying meter

o   Rhyming scheme – ababcdcde

 

Background

The poem was written in 1819 when Keats was ill. At that time he was living with a friend in Hampton. It is said that in April, a nightingale had built a nest in the garden and Keats heard the nightingale as he sat in the garden one evening making “Ode to a Nightingale” an autobiographical poem. Consequently, the speaker on the poem and the poet are to be taken as one and the same.

 

‘Romantic’ qualities in the poem

o   Privileging of the power of imagination

o   The poet expresses intense feelings – of joy, fear, and loss

o   The poet delights in natural beauty

o   Keats uses wide a range of auditory, tactile, visual, and olfactory images

o   Use of natural imagery

o   The poet builds a close association between natural beauty and poetic inspiration

o   Human conflicts/problems are understood in relation to nature   

o   The poet undertakes a journey of self-discovery in the course of the poem

o   Keats attempts to find meaning of life, art and salvation in poetry

o   The poem is also about how imagination affects the person who imadines.

 

Themes

o   The contrast between the ideal and the real

o   Memory and forgetting

o   Mortality:  

o   Awareness of the poet’s own sickness and mortality vs. beauty and immortality of the bird’s song

o   The conflict between the need to experience passionate feelings and the yearning to escape

o   Awareness of pain and suffering Vs. joy brought by the bird’s song – the idea that human joy and pain are inextricably linked, one giving meaning to the other

o   Yearning for happiness and meaning for life through poetry

 

Analysis

 

With “Ode to a Nightingale,” Keats’s speaker begins his fullest and deepest exploration of the themes of creative expression/art and the transience/mortality of human life. In this ode, the transience of all forms of life –“where palsy shakes a few, sad, last gray hairs, / Where youth grows pale, and spectre-thin, and dies” – is set against the nightingale’s eternal song: “Thou wast not born for death, immortal bird”.

The form:

An ode is “a short lyric poem that praises an individual, an idea, or an event. In ancient Greece, odes were originally accompanied by music—in fact, the word “ode” comes from the Greek word aeidein, which means to sing or to chant.”

The title:

The ode here is to “a” nightingale – signaling that the nightingale was one that he had never encountered. Nightingales have a lot of mythical associations. They are also known for their beautiful songs and elusive nature.

 

SI

My heart aches, and a drowsy numbness pains

         My sense, as though of hemlock I had drunk,

Or emptied some dull opiate to the drains

         One minute past, and Lethe-wards had sunk:

Looking at the other poems dealing with similar contents that are in the Advanced Level syllabus, in “Sonnet 141” Shakespearean poetic persona is in despair over his reason losing the battle with his heart. In it, senses feed the poetic persona’s reason and warn him against the unsuitability of the woman he is attracted to. The poet feels that he is no longer a man as he is dominated by his heart.

Keats on the other hand feels no shame over privileging his heart and emotions. In this poem the speaker opens the ode with two problems he is suffering from: his heart is aching and his senses are numb. The 3 commas used in this section hint at pauses – maybe due to his sickness or his contemplative mood. The numbing of the senses is a tragedy for a poet, especially a Romantic poet who relied heavily on his senses and privileges heart over reason. Keats offers two similes in order to illustrate the drowsy numbness that pains his senses: “as though of hemlock I had drunk,/ Or emptied some dull opiate to the drains/ One minute past, and Lethe-wards had sunk”.

Keats is conscious of moving towards Lethe-wards, death and oblivion, minute by minute. Hemlock is notorious as the poison that was used to kill Socrates. It is said that a person who drank hemlock would feel a progressive sense of numbness which begins at the extremities. Lethe is a river mentioned in Greek myths. It marked a boundary between the land of the living and the dead. Once one drank water from the river, one forgot everything about his life on earth. When an opiate is injected into one’s drains/ veins, one dies and forgets everything.

Forgetfulness and death may have its benefits in the form of relief from troubling thoughts, but the poetic persona would also forgets everything else as well and become a faint shadow described in horrifying details in The Odyssey. The long vowel sounds used liberally in this section indicates sluggishness. At this point, the poetic persona addresses the nightingale directly (apostrophe) and tells the bird the reason for the pain he is experiencing:   

'Tis not through envy of thy happy lot,

         But being too happy in thine happiness,—

                That thou, light-winged Dryad of the trees

                        In some melodious plot

         Of beechen green, and shadows numberless,

                Singest of summer in full-throated ease.

A Dryad is a wood nymph – a magical being. By calling the nightingale a “Dryad” the poet allocates magical powers and immortality to the bird. The use of the old fashioned honourific terms such as “thy”, “thine” and “thou” to refer to the nightingale further cements the sense of respect the poet is awarding he bird. They mark the distance between the immortal bird and the mortal poet who is dying at the moment. He is addressing a nightingale – a “light-winged Dryad of the trees” - he hears singing somewhere in the forest and says that he is not envious of the nightingale’s happiness. In fact, he is all too happy to visualize the bird singing “in full-throated ease” in some hidden place in the shadowy depth of a beach forest. Through that statement Keats displays a superhuman sense of generosity of spirit. The feeling of heaviness that weighs both his body and spirit down as opposed to the lightness of the bird must have been painful for the poetic persona.

In this section the poet creates euphony through the use of shorter vowel sounds and the frequent use of /s/ , /l/, /r/, etc. to illustrate the beauty of the song and the existence of the bird. 

Summer is the season of plentitude and rejuvenation – yet the poet is being constantly reminded of his mortality. Here, the poet has juxtaposed the vitality of the bird as an artist and a living being as opposed to the vanning vitality of the Keats as an artist and a man.

SII

My heart aches, and a drowsy numbness pains

         My sense, as though of hemlock I had drunk,

Or emptied some dull opiate to the drains

         One minute past, and Lethe-wards had sunk:

'Tis not through envy of thy happy lot,

         But being too happy in thine happiness,—

                That thou, light-winged Dryad of the trees

                        In some melodious plot

         Of beechen green, and shadows numberless,

                Singest of summer in full-throated ease.

 

In the second stanza, overwhelmed by the pain of a dying body and dulling faculties, the poet is yearning “for a drought of vintage” or “for a beaker full of the warm South”. At this point the poet hungers for fresh inspirations so that he could leave a legacy in poetry behind him. In that context the yearning for wine is significant as in Greko-Roman mythology – something Keats was heavily influenced by – Baccus/Dionysus, the god of wine was also the god of poetry.

Interestingly, it is one particular type of wine the poet yearns for: it should be “Cool’d a long age in the deep-delved earth,/ Tasting of Flora and the country green,/ Dance, and Provencal song, and sunburnt mirth!” – all the images used here are pastoral in keeping with the Romantic Tradition. The poet creates a visual, tactile cum gustatory image of a cool glass of wine which would be a welcome relief in his feverish state.

Next, he yearns for beaker full of warm south. The longing is once again highlighted by the use of “O” at the beginning of the line as in the first line of the stanza. He wishes that he could drink the salubriousness of the South that would restore his health. The warm south should contain “true” –genuine – shy- elusive/red wine which the poet calls Hippocrene – a stream sacred to the seven Muses of the Greek mythology. This, as in the earlier occasion, could be a latent yearning for more poetic inspiration in the dying poet in order the leave a legacy of poetry behind. 

The beakerful of sparkling wine is graphically described – “With beaded bubbles winking at the brim,” - the drinking of which would leave a “purple-stained mouth”. The mouth could be purple stained due to the colour of the wine or in death. He yearns to leave the trials and tribulations of his condition and be one with the bird. This yearning is an example of a quality critics see in Keats which they call Negative Capability. 

Compared to the fast moving shorter vowel sounds in the first 8 lines of the poem indicating vigor bestowed upon him by the drinks, the longer vowel sounds in the last two lines indicate his true state and his longing to be free of pain both physical and psychological.   

SIII

Fade far away, dissolve, and quite forget

         What thou among the leaves hast never known,

The weariness, the fever, and the fret

         Here, where men sit and hear each other groan;

Where palsy shakes a few, sad, last gray hairs,

         Where youth grows pale, and spectre-thin, and dies;

                Where but to think is to be full of sorrow

                        And leaden-eyed despairs,

         Where Beauty cannot keep her lustrous eyes,

                Or new Love pine at them beyond to-morrow.

The third stanza is a continuation of the thought process begun in the 2nd. The poet uses enjambment in this section to mark the continuation. The poetic persona expresses a desire “to fade away, dissolve, and quite forget” “[t]he weariness, the fever, and the fret” which the bird, according to him, “hast never known”.

The use of commas once again marks the tiredness and the mood of the poet. “The weariness, the fever, and the fret” is not limited to him; all around him “men sit and hear each other groan”. Death is not a timely thing: “youth grows pale, and spectre-thin, and dies”. Under such circumstances thinking brings nothing but “sorrow/And leaden-eyed despairs”. Through the repetition of the term “where” – an instance of the usage of anaphora – the poet stresses the miserable nature of the place he is in as opposed to the “melodious plot” occupied by the bird. At this point the poet is extremely sensitive to the transient nature of human life as opposed to the immortality of art – the nightingale is a metaphor for art/poetry.   Beauty and love are personified by the poet. Compared to the immortality of poetry/art, even beauty and love are short-lived.  

SIV

Away! away! for I will fly to thee,

         Not charioted by Bacchus and his pards,

But on the viewless wings of Poesy,

         Though the dull brain perplexes and retards:

 

In the fourth stanza, the speaker tells the nightingale to fly away – the technique used here is apostrophe. The repetition of “Away” and the use of the exclamation mark a change of thought and a sense of urgency in the poet. Now, instead of seeking to be one with the bird with the aid of a “draught of vintage” and a “beaker full of Warm South”, he turns to another course. He says, “I will fly to thee, Not charioted by Bacchus and his pards, But on the viewless wings of Poesy”. Bacchus is another name of Dionysus, in a more ecstatic form. The poet rejects being one with the bird under the influence of Bacchus whose followers were known for violence and orgies.     

Instead, he chooses the gentle “viewless wings of Poesy” as the mode of transport to get to the bird in spite of the fact his “dull brain perplexes and retards”. He says he is already with the nightingale and describes the forest glade, where even the moonlight is hidden by the trees, except the light that breaks through when the breeze moves the branches.

Already with thee! tender is the night,

         And haply the Queen-Moon is on her throne,

                Cluster'd around by all her starry Fays;

                        But here there is no light,

         Save what from heaven is with the breezes blown

                Through verdurous glooms and winding mossy ways.

 

The poet feels that he had reached the bird astride the wings of poesy – through this poem. As a result, the night becomes a thing of beauty: “Tender is the night[i],” he says. The poet anticipates what he would see on his way to be with the bird. Up in the sky “the Queen-Moon is on her throne,/ Cluster'd around by all her starry Fays.” However, there is no light within the beechen green except the patches of light that filter through the thick canopy of leaves as it is moved by the wind.  

SV

I cannot see what flowers are at my feet,

         Nor what soft incense hangs upon the boughs,

But, in embalmed darkness, guess each sweet

         Wherewith the seasonable month endows

The grass, the thicket, and the fruit-tree wild;

         White hawthorn, and the pastoral eglantine;

                Fast fading violets cover'd up in leaves;

                        And mid-May's eldest child,

         The coming musk-rose, full of dewy wine,

                The murmurous haunt of flies on summer eves.

Typical to Romantic poetry, Keats is immersed in nature in this stanza. Keats imagines that is travelling on foot through the dark beechen forest in the trail of the elusive nightingale. At this point he seemed to have forgotten that he had set out on the “viewless wings of Poesy”. The forest is so dark that he cannot see the flowers at his feet but he can guess what they were even “in embalmed darkness” by their smell – for he has a knowledge of the different smells “the seasonable month endows” the “grass, the thicket, and the fruit-tree wild”. In each month of each season different trees come into bloom, so by smelling the flower one can guess which tree it is in the fragrant darkness given one is in tune with nature. Through this Keats suggests to his reader some of the benefits of being one with nature.

Each flower the poet names has a connotation in the context of the poem: The white hawthorn “is a pagan symbol of fertility and has ancient associations with May Day. It was the ancestor of the Maypole. Hawthorn leaves and flowers are the source of May Day garlands as well as the wreath of the Green Man. It was believed that bringing hawthorn blossom inside would be followed by illness and death, and in the Medieval times it was said that hawthorn blossom smelled like the Great Plague. Botanists later learned that the chemical trimethylamine in hawthorn blossom is also one of the first chemicals formed in decaying animal tissue, so it is not surprising that hawthorn flowers are associated with death.”

Similarly, eglantine, violets and musk-rose too are summer flowers, “murmurous haunt of flies on summer eves,” which have their own connotational and denotational significance within the context of the main theme of transience of life. The poet uses alliteration and onomatopoeia to create auditory images of the summer.  The stanza is an example of Keats’ mastery over images through which he creates a veritable repast for the five senses.

SVI

 Darkling I listen; and, for many a time

         I have been half in love with easeful Death,

Call'd him soft names in many a mused rhyme,

         To take into the air my quiet breath;

                Now more than ever seems it rich to die,

         To cease upon the midnight with no pain,

                While thou art pouring forth thy soul abroad

                        In such an ecstasy!

         Still wouldst thou sing, and I have ears in vain—

                   To thy high requiem become a sod.

In the sixth stanza, the poetic persona addresses the bird as “Darkling” and tells her that he is listening to her song. The use of the present simple for the short clause may be an implication of the Romantic characteristic of being attentive to nature – its sounds, smells, tastes and feelings. The term little dark being contains both a sense affection as well as closeness which is devoid in Dryad which was absent in the mythical term “Dryad” or the generic term “Bird”. He says to the nightingale that he has often been “half in love” with the idea of dying as it would give him ease from the constant suffering he is undergoing.  He, like a priest that worshiped death, had invoked personified Death “soft names in many mused rhymes” (apostrophe) and asked it to “take into the air” his “quiet breat”. The use of “quiet” implies Keats’s assurance that he would not put up any resistance should Death deign to comply with his request.  

Immersed in the beauty of the nightingale’s song, the poetic persona thinks that there cannot be a better time to die: “Now more than ever seems it rich to die,” he says as it would allow him to “cease upon the midnight with no pain” while the nightingale was “pouring forth” its “soul abroad/ In such an ecstasy”. With the use of the term “pouring” the poet invites the reader to think of the bird as a vessel that pours out its soul – its joyful qualities – in ecstasy. The poet’s own amazement and joy at the experience is marked by the use of the exclamation at the end of the line. Similarly, the use of hyphen at the end of the penultimate line, an example of the use of aposiopesis, suggests the very act of listening and the possibility of the poetic persona being at a loss for words to express his feelings as well as. The poet realizes that if he were to die, the nightingale would continue to sing, but he would “have ears in vain” for he would no longer be able to hear as his ears would have turned to sod by then. The suggestion that only his faculty of hearing would be affected by death is an example of the use of synecdoche, a type of understatement or euphemism, which hints at Keats’ fear of what succeeds death, being forgotten - an idea he explores more fully in “Ode on a Grecian Urn” as well:

Who are these coming to the sacrifice?

         To what green altar, O mysterious priest,

Lead'st thou that heifer lowing at the skies,

         And all her silken flanks with garlands drest?

What little town by river or sea shore,

         Or mountain-built with peaceful citadel,

                Is emptied of this folk, this pious morn?

And, little town, thy streets for evermore

         Will silent be; and not a soul to tell

                Why thou art desolate, can e'er return (from “Ode on a Grecian Urn”)

 

In “Ode to a Nightingale” the use of the term “requiem” suggests that Keats imagines the bird would sing a song to mark its sorrow over his passing. He would attempt to listen to requiem sung in his memory by the bird; however, he would not be able to hear the requiem as his ears would have been turned to “sod” by then. Here, the poet hints at a truth: human life maybe full of suffering; still, it is only as we exist in our human form here on earth we would be able to enjoy things of beauty. The same idea is further dealt with in “Ode on a Grecian Urn”. The use of the term “requiem” could also be read as a tacit appeal to his fellow poets, the human nightingales, to honour his memory by acknowledging his presence here on earth so that he would not be forgotten.

SVII 

Thou wast not born for death, immortal Bird!

         No hungry generations tread thee down;

The voice I hear this passing night was heard

         In ancient days by emperor and clown:

Perhaps the self-same song that found a path

         Through the sad heart of Ruth, when, sick for home,

                She stood in tears amid the alien corn;

                        The same that oft-times hath

         Charm'd magic casements, opening on the foam

                Of perilous seas, in faery lands forlorn.

In the seventh stanza, the poetic persona further elaborates on two of the greatest human fears: mortality and being forgotten. He once again addresses the bird directly and assures it of its immortality in both years and of fame. Through the use of litotes, the poet introduces a contrast between the mortal poet and the immortal bird – thus he creates profound sense pathos for a young talented poet dying at the very height of his poetic capabilities. The nightingale’s song is art accessible to everyone irrespective of differences. “[H]ungry generations” are people who crave novelty. In order to satisfy their craving for novelty they move on from one source of gratification to the next fast. Here, the poet is alluding to his fear of being forgotten after his work has ceased to be a source of novel pleasure. 

In contrast, he says that the voice he hears singing has always been there –it is eternal and immortal. The nightingale sings the same song:

The voice I hear this passing night was heard

         In ancient days by emperor and clown:

Perhaps the self-same song that found a path

         Through the sad heart of Ruth, when, sick for home,

                She stood in tears amid the alien corn;

                        The same that oft-times hath

         Charm'd magic casements, opening on the foam

                Of perilous seas, in faery lands forlorn

It has been heard by ancient emperors and clowns – the two ends of the sociopolitical spectrum; by homesick Ruth – a character that appears in the Old Testament and even the fairies - the song has often charmed open magic windows looking out over “the foam / Of perilous seas, in faery lands forlorn” – once opened by the power of the nightingale’s song, the magical windows overlook dangerous foam tossed seas in the faraway fairy land. However, the reaction the listener has to the song differs according to his or state of mind – it could offer adventure (emperor), entertainment (clown), consolation (Ruth), or freedom (the fairies behind the magically shut windows). Hence, the song exists in a perpetual present making it eternal. The song of the nightingale a timeless universal quality that transcends time and space. The “hungry generations” have no influence over it. It is this realization that compels Keats to embrace Poesy’s “viewless wings” to express himself to the outside world. When juxtaposed with that timelessness of the bird’s song, the shortness of the span of time Keats gets to sing his own song stands out in stark contrast.

SVIII

Forlorn! the very word is like a bell

         To toll me back from thee to my sole self!

Adieu! the fancy cannot cheat so well

         As she is fam'd to do, deceiving elf.

Adieu! adieu! thy plaintive anthem fades

         Past the near meadows, over the still stream,

                Up the hill-side; and now 'tis buried deep

                        In the next valley-glades:

         Was it a vision, or a waking dream?

                Fled is that music:—Do I wake or sleep?

In the eighth stanza, the word “Forlorn” shatters the spell the song of the nightingale has cast on the poet. The word “toll” acts like a bell in keeping with the references to death in the previous stanza and reminds the poet of the unpleasant truth that he is on his own. As the nightingale flies farther away from him, he bids it “Adieu!” The references to various places along the way, telescopes the distance covered by the bird. However, the poet does not attempt to join the bird either imbibed or astride the viewless wings of poesy. The reason is the realization that his imagination is not up to that task: “the fancy cannot cheat so well/As she is fam'd to do”. There is a resigned chiding note in the reference to “fancy” as “deceiving elf”. He laments that fancy (his imagination) is not as powerful as it was it was “fam’d” to be. Here, the poet seems to be referring to his earlier resolution to fly to the bird astride the viewless wings of poesy in the previous stanza. In his weakened state he is unable to sustain the “fancy” of himself following the bird.

Once again he bids farewell to the bird: “Adieu! adieu! thy plaintive anthem fades”. The repetition of the term “adieu” adds a note of finality and sadness to the poem. The poetic persona is bidding farewell to maybe the very last thing that would fill him with true happiness. In response, the once joyous song of the nightingale becomes “plaintive” and then fades away as the bird moves farther and farther away. Here, by using the term “plaintive” to describe the song, the poet might be projecting some of his own feeling of great loss to the song as well.  In the end he says he can no longer recall whether the nightingale’s music was “a vision, or a waking dream.”

In the last line the poet evaluates Keats experience. He wonders whether it was a vision or a day dream. A vision is significant to a Romantic – a vision[ii] is a divine message whereas a day dream is of little importance.

The music has finally faded away completely. The poem end with a loaded rhetorical question: “Do I wake or sleep?” The poet wonders whether he should wake up to the ugly reality of the world or continue to sleep – maintain illusion. The poem end with the poet still irresolute/ undecided.      

 

Techniques

o    Language is Formal and decorous befitting an ode

o   Synthesia – a poetic device used by Keats to combine different senses in one phrase – “sunburnt mirth”, “blissful Hippcrene” …

o   Alliteration – deep –delved, fever and the fret

o   Assonance – beechen green

o   Onomatopoeia – murmurous haunt

o   Personification – happy the queen Moon, Beauty, death

o   The nightingale is a symbol of joy and desire to escape the world of suffering

o   Images from nature, summer, the woods, the night sky, the country side

o   Allusion – to classical mythology – Hippocrene, Baccus and his pards; reference to the Bible – Ruth

o   Tone – a melancholic tone filled with changing moods and poetic imagination

 

Questions:

1.      Keats’ poetry is a celebration of human imaginative power. Explore your response to this view by examining Keats’ presentation of imagination in “Ode to a Nightingale.”

2.      It has been observed by critics that in his poetry Keats takes the reader to the limits of human experience. Discuss.



[i] This phrase has been used as the title of one of his novels by F Scott Fitzgerald.

[ii] William Blake places visions as the inspiration for much of his work. In poems like “Daffodils”, William Wordsworth, too, highlights the importance of visions.  


A discussion on මතක මග මගහැර by Sandya Kumudini Liyanage

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