Saturday, July 14, 2018

Elizabethan Poetry/Shakespearian Sonnets




There are 154 sonnets attributed to Shakespeare. And of these 126 are dedicated to a handsome young man. In most of these 126 sonnets Shakespeare praises the beauty of this young man and requests him to get married and have an heir to carry on his line:

o   Sonnets 127 to 152 are dedicated to a Dark Lady, possibly a Lady in Waiting to Elizabeth I
o   Shakespeare was in love with her but she had an affair with the ‘young man’ and said to have a child by him
o   The above mentioned love triangle had provided Shakespeare with insight to human nature and relationships the sonnet sequence deals with themes such as mortality, deception and the eternal power of the written word

Sonnet 73

That time of year thou mayst in me behold
When yellow leaves, or none, or few, do hang
Upon those boughs which shake against the cold,
Bare ruined choirs, where late the sweet birds sang.
In me thou seest the twilight of such day
As after sunset fadeth in the west,
Which by and by black night doth take away,
Death’s second self, that seals up all in rest.
In me thou seest the glowing of such fire
That on the ashes of his youth doth lie,
As the deathbed whereon it must expire
Consumed with that which it was nourished by.
  This thou perceiv’st, which makes thy love more strong,
  To love that well which thou must leave ere long.

When you look at me, you can see an image of those times of year when the leaves are yellow or have fallen, or when the trees have no leaves at all and the bare branches where the sweet birds recently sang shiver in anticipation of the cold. In me you can see the twilight that remains after the sunset fades in the west, which by and by is replaced by black night, the twin of death, which closes up everyone in eternal rest. In me you can see the remains of a fire still glowing atop the ashes of its early stages, as if it lay on its own deathbed, on which it has to burn out, consuming what used to fuel it. You see all these things, and they make your love stronger, because you love even more what you know you’ll lose before long.


Sonnet 130 - My Mistress’ Eyes are Nothing Like the Sun – William Shakespeare

Themes
o   Sincerity of the poet’s love depictes the absence of conventional beauty in the mistress
o   Questions/satirizes the stereotypical idea of beauty found in contemporary poetry

Analysis
o   In this poem the poet satirizes the conventional courtly poems (Petrachan love sonnets)that put women on pedestals and treated them as goddesses
o   Sonnet 130 is a parody of the Dark Lady, who falls too obviously short of fashionable beauty to be extolled in poetry.
o   The poet, openly contemptuous of his weakness for the woman, expresses his infatuation for her in negative comparisons.
o   The poet expresses his passion for the Dark Lady in negative comparisons: "black wires grow on her head."
o   Shakespeare names and rejects many things in the natural world that appear in love poems:
o   the sun = bright eyes = “My mistress’ eyes are nothing like the sun”
o   coral = the colour of the lips = “Coral is far more read than her lips”
o   snow = colour of the breasts = “If snow be white, her breasts are dun”
o   hair is golden = “If hair be wires, black wire grows on her head”
o   perfume = the odour of the breath = her breath “reeks”
o   music = the voice = I love to hear her speak but I know/That music hath a far more pleasing sound
o   a goddess = “My mistress when she walks threads on ground”
o   To the Renaissance reader who wanted to see women as dainty and idealized creatures, this should have been shocking
o   Despite her flaw Shakespeare is still attracted to her and he tries to understand why he is attracted
o   Her greatest weakness is her rashness. She has been false to Shakespeare. When Shakespeare offered her true love the lady has taken it and compared it with the love of her other lover
o   Yet, Shakespeare accepts her as she is despite her weaknesses 
o   The poet must be very secure in his love for his mistress — and hers for him — for him to be as disparaging as he is, even in jest — a security he did not enjoy with the young man.
o   Although the turn "And yet" in the concluding couplet signals the negation of all the disparaging comments the poet has made about the Dark Lady, the sonnet's last two lines arguably do not erase the horrendous comparisons in the three quatrains.

Techniques
o   Parodies the Petrachan tradition – subvert the conventions used in traditional love poetry
o   Use of clichéd imagery – eyes like the sun, cheeks full of roses, musical speech – overturns the clichés in the end
o   Meaningful and well developed argument
o   Use of satire


Sonnet 138 - When My Love Swears That she is Made of Truth- William Shakespeare
o   This too is dedicated to the Dark Lady
o   Sonnet 138 presents a candid psychological study of the mistress that reveals many of her hypocrisies.
o   Certainly she is still very much the poet's mistress, but the poet is under no illusions about hercharacter: "When my love swears that she is made of truth, / I do believe her, though I know she lies."
o   He accepts without protest her "false-speaking tongue" and expects nothing better of her.
o   Cynically, he too deceives and is comforted by knowing that he is no longer fooled by the woman's charade of fidelity to him, nor she by how young and simpleminded he presents himself to be.
o   In a relationship without affection or trust, the two lovers agree to a relationship based on mutual deception.
o   Both agree never to voice the truth about just how much their relationship is built on never-spoken truths: "But wherefore says she not she is unjust? / And wherefore say not I that I am old?"
o   Note that the sentence construction in these two lines is identical, similar to how both the poet and the woman identically feign lying when each knows that the other knows the truth.
o   The main theme of the concluding two lines is lust, but it is treated with a wry humor.
o   The poet is content to support the woman's lies because he is flattered that she thinks him young — even though he knows that she is well aware of just how old he is.
o   On the other hand, he does not challenge her pledges of faithfulness — even though she knows that he is aware of her infidelity.
o   Neither is disposed to unveil the other's defects.
o   Ultimately the poet and the woman remain together for two reasons, the first being their sexual relationship, the second that they are obviously comfortable with each other's lying.
o   Both of these reasons are indicated by the pun on the word "lie," meaning either "to have sex with" or "to deceive": "Therefore I lie with her and she with me, / And in our faults by lies we flattered be."
Themes
o   Appearance and reality in romantic relationships

Form and language:
o   Shakespeare uses the 14-line sonnet form of Petrach imported to England by Wyatt and Surrey
o   However, he divides his sonnets into a three quatrains and a final rhyming couplet.
o   He also uses independent rhyming schemes for each of the quatrains as well as for the couplet – abab, cdcd, efef, gg
o   He employs iambic pentameter – ten-syllable lines - for all his sonnets
o   Shakespeare uses Anglo-Saxon monosyllabic words which makes his language both phonetically and semantically
o   There is a certain rhythm and musicality when monosyllabic words are put together
o   They are also semantically rich – the poet seems to say a lot in few words –economy of language
o   The use of Anglo-Saxon words make Shakespeare’s work more ‘English’ – earlier courtly love poetry used more Latin and French polysyllabic words

Techniques
o   Use of figurative language
o   Use of personification  love’s best habit
o   Punning – various meanings of ‘lie’, ‘made’

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