The
poem “Mid-Term Break” is written as seven three-lined stanzas followed by a
single line. The topic of the poem implies joy and freedom from restrictive
atmosphere of school. It is misleading. The student in this poem is not about
to enjoy this sudden windfall. He has
got a midterm break due to a tragedy in his family.
I sat all morning in the college
sick bay
Counting bells knelling classes to a
close.
At two o’clock our neighbours drove
me home.
Upon
arriving at home he sees his father crying. It was unusual for his father to
give into grief. He has not given into tears at other funerals. Jim Evens gives
the reason for tears, it was a hard blow.
The
baby unaffected by the turmoil happily coos and laughs rocking in its pram.
When the boy enters his house the old men stand up to shake hands with him in
recognition of his loss. The boy is embarrassed by the attention he receives.
Total strangers share the information they have gathered with the newcomers. It
is a familiar sight at a tragedy.
The
boy’s mother is beyond tears. She coughs “out angry tearless sighs” clinging to
his hand. The grief is too great for tears. Then at ten the ambulance arrives
bringing the corpse. After death a person is referred to as a corps. Spirit has
left the body, therefore, the body would not be called by a name. The nurses
have stanched the blood and bandaged the wounds. One could say that it is
useless. But it must have been done as a mark of respect to the dead. It also
comforts the living with the knowledge that everything possible has been done.
The
following day the boy goes up to see the body. He sees his little brother lying
in his box. There are snowdrops and candles next to him adding colour and light
to the room. To the boy his brother seems paler. Death has robbed the healthy
glow the very young possesses. Other than a red bruise on his temple there are
no disfiguring marks on the body. It is as if the little boy was in his cot.
The accident has mercifully drought a quick and clean death.
The
tragedy is unleashed in its full force in the last line: “A four foot box, a
foot for every year.” The
little boy was just four years old. The coffin was just four feet long, “ a
foot for every year.”
Techniques:
The
poet keeps the readers in suspense till the end of the poem about the identity
of the person who died. The poem begins with a person listening to the passage
of time: counting bells knelling classes to a close. Time passes and lives come
to an end. Bells also knell at funerals. It is as if the bells at school have
understood the loss of the boy.
He
contrasts the behaviour of the adults with that of the baby. The very young are
untouched by the harsh realities of life. The embarrassment felt by the boy
when the old men gets up to offer condolences adds a touch of reality. It is
how a real boy would feel despite the tragic circumstances. The snowdrops are a
symbol of the innocent childhood. Light of the candles also stands for life.
Ironically both are next to a dead body. It is as if the relatives are trying
to dull the pain by surrounding themselves with symbols of life. He uses a metaphor when he calls the bruise a
“poppy bruise”. Poppy is red. It also implies oblivion. The bruise was the
cause of death, oblivion.
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