Saturday, July 14, 2018

What is a Short Story?



Much of modern writing is carefully designed to manipulate our minds and condition us to the writer’s way of thinking.
·         Ideological State Apparatus.
·         Performs the Culture works.
·         Hegemonic.
·         Anderson’s theory on Third World literature  
A critical mind helps to develop a healthy critical awareness of the written word.
Writers through use of language create characters and describe events and so on which manipulate our responses; however, because their effects tend to be large scale effects, we are not immediately aware of them.
If a novel/short story is successful we are so absorbed in the action that we only notice techniques used by the writer at the second or third reading.
Critical appraisal of prose – novels and short stories – requires the close and detailed analysis of a piece of writing in order to determine how the writer obtains certain effects.
These effects include:
·         The selection of language
·         The arrangement and structuring of ideas in order to achieve his purpose most effectively.
When you are faced with a prose passage for appraisal, read the passage carefully twice, aiming to comprehend fully the meaning of what is said.

Analysing a short story:
Short stories generally produce a single focussed emotional and intellectual response in the reader.
Often reveals character through significant moments or epiphanies rather than through the accretion/piling up of many incidents or detailed descriptions
In contrast novels usually depict conflicts among many characters developed through a variety of episodes stimulating a complex of responses in the reader.
There are three basic characteristics all short stories share:
·         Brevity
·         Conscience (sense) – ss usually has a single plot, a single setting, a limited number of characters. It focuses only on one incident – one moment in life/ one slice of life. It usually covers a short period of time in the story.
·         One impression – deals with one issue or theme
What makes a short story compelling and memorable?
A critical analysis of a short story allows a reader to take a critical and objective look at how a writer uses the elements of literature to create a unique work of art. A close analysis of a piece of literature gives one insight into how the author crafted the work and adds to your understanding of it.

Analysing elements of a short stories:
·         Plot – the sequence of events in a story – a series of related incidents. Most plots deal with a problem and develop around a conflict, a struggle between opposing forces. The plot is the underlying structure of a story. Most plots develop in five stages:
o   Basic situation/exposition – introduces the main characters (protagonists/antagonists) and other characters, the setting, relationships of the main characters, and the story’s major conflict – introduces and develops the problem the main character is facing
§  Setting – the time and place of a story/play. It may be presented immediately through descriptive details or it may be revealed gradually. The setting contributes greatly to the story’s emotional effect. Two of the main functions of setting are to reveal character and to suggest a theme
§  Conflict – a struggle or clash between opposing characters, forces or emotions.
·         External – a character struggles against some outside force: another character, society as a whole, or some natural force
·         Internal – a struggle between two needs, desires, emotions within a single character.
o   Rising action – develops the plot and the problem towards the climax; this heightens anticipation of the reader. Complications heighten the conflict and suspense
o   Climax/turning point – the point of greatest emotional intensity or suspense of the plot when the outcome of the conflict becomes known. Following the climax, the story is resolved.  In contrast, when something trivial or comical occurs at the point in a narrative when one expects something important or serious, the accompanying deflation is called an anti-climax. Araby by James Joyce 
o   Falling action – develops a change in the main character – understanding, regret, a decision
o   The resolution/ denouement - reveals how the main character comes to term with his problem. All the problems or mysteries of the plot are unravelled   
§  Flashbacks, flash forwards, foreshadowing are some of the techniques used in developing plot
§  Frame story – an introductory narrative within which one or more of the characters proceed to tell individual stories. The Thousand and One Nights, The Canterbury Tales
§  In Medias Res – starting a story in the middle and then use flashbacks to tell what happened earlier

·         Setting – the time and place in which the story occurs
o   Where and when does the story take place?
o   The setting includes not only physical surroundings but also ideas, values, customs and ideas.
o   Does the setting affect the plot, the characters, or the mood or atmosphere of the story? How?
§  The story takes place a long time ago in a land ruled by a king and a queen.
·         Characters
o   Characters are the actors in a story’s plot. They can be people, animals or whatever the writer chooses. A character always has human traits, even if the character is an animal. A character may also be a human with superhuman powers. But most characters are ordinary human beings. The process by which a writer reveals the personality of a character is called characterization.
o   The protagonist is the focus of our attention. In a good story the protagonist is a realistic, complicated being with just enough strengths, weaknesses and contradictions to remind us of ourselves – Cinderella
o   The antagonist – the character or the force that blocks the protagonist from achieving his or her goal – the stepsisters and their mother
o   The conflict between the protagonist and the antagonist is what hooks our attention, creates suspense, and drives the plot in most stories. This struggle is an example of external conflict since it involves the protagonist and some outside force. This outside force might be another character or group, society as a whole, or even something in nature. In an internal conflict the protagonist wrestles with his or her own fears and worries or the need to make a decision.
o   Subordinate characters – are in a story for a reason. The main character’s relationship with them helps to reveal the protagonist’s character and may also develop the story’s conflict.

o   A writer can reveal a character in the following ways:
§  Direct characterization - By telling us directly what the character is like: humble, ambitious, vain, easily manipulated, etc.
§  Indirect characterization -
·         Be describing how the character looks and dressed
·         By letting us hear the character speak
·         By revealing the character’s private thoughts and feelings
·         By revealing the character’s effect on other people – showing how other characters feel or behave towards the character
·         By showing the character’s actions
·         When a writer uses these methods we have to exercise our own judgement, putting clues together to figure out what a character is like just as we do in real life when we are getting to know someone
o   Characters can also be static or dynamic.
·         Static – one who does not change much in the course of the story
·         Dynamic – changes in some important way as a result of the story’s action.
·         The protagonist of the story is almost always a dynamic character. S/he is someone who changes in an important way during the course of the story. By the end of the story a dynamic charter has gained a new understanding, made an important decision, or taken a crucial action, dynamic actions are capable of learning, growing, and changing.
·         In contrast the subordinate characters are almost always static. They are exactly the same at the end of the story as they were at the beginning. Static characters do not necessarily represent in the failure in the writer’s art. In good fiction, SC are supposed to be static. Too many characters undergoing changes can be distracting, especially in a short story   
o   Characters can be classified as flat or round
·         Flat – has only one-dimension. Can be summed up by a single phrase
·         Round – has more dimensions to their characters – they are complex, solid, and multifaceted like real people
o   Aspects of Character Drawing:
§  Characters can be revealed by the following methods:
·         Action
·         Speech
·         By direct statement of the author on the character
·         Description of characters in a novel by an omniscient narrator
·         By association of one character with a recurrent image
·         By associating a character with one particular point of view or action with which he can be easily identified
·         By choice of words and picking out a particular feature or detail which calls a character vividly to mind

·         Point of view
o   The vantage point from which a story is told. The person telling the story is the narrator.
§  The 1st person point of view – the narrator, a character in the story, uses ‘I’ and ‘me’ to tell the story
§  The 3rd person point of view – the narrator describes the characters and action from outside the story
·         A 3rd person omniscient narrator knows everything that goes on – Cinderella is told from the 3rd person omniscient point of view. The narrator knows what all the characters are doing and thinking
·         A 3rd person limited narrator describes events as one character sees them
·         Theme – the central idea or insight about human experience revealed in a work of literature. The theme is the idea that the writer wishes to convey about the subject – the writer’s view of the world or revelation about human nature. A theme may also be different from a moral, which is a lesson or rule about how to live. Most themes are implied. It is up to the reader to piece together all the clues the writer has provided about the work’s total meaning.

o   Stated themes – directly presented in a story
o   Implied themes – must be inferred. Readers need to consider all the elements of a story ad ask what message about life they convey 

Comparing universal themes
People all over the world and throughout time have shared common emotions, concerns and experiences – it’s what makes us human. We all want to be loved; we all have dreams; we cope with loss, death, and disappointment. Our universal concerns are reflected in literature as universal themes.   
These broad themes come up again and again in literature; yet, each writer gives a personal insight o twist to these themes.
·         Style – the manner in which writers or speakers say what they wish to say. An author’s style simultaneously expresses his ideas and reveals his unique way of expressing them. Style is closely connected to diction:
·         Sentence structure
·         Language and imagery
·         Tone
o   Formal/informal
o   Sympathetic/ unsympathetic
o   Serious/comic
o   Emotional/ restrained
o   Cynical/ sentimental
o   Biased/impartial
Authors carefully arrange words into sentences and sentences into paragraphs to produce a particular effect.
·         Colloquial – used when the writer wishes to suggest a certain class or a certain regional atmosphere
·         Didactic style – writer intend to instruct his readers
·         Dramatic style vs. Melodrama  -The Secret Agent by Joseph Conrad
·         Comic style
·         Plain/ ornate
·         Abstract/concrete
·         simple or flowery (shop/boutique)
·         modern/contemporary or old fashioned/archaic (pharmacy/ apothecary)
·         general or specific (sandwich/ grilled cheese on rye)
·         Lucid/direct/journalistic  or obtuse – hard to understand
·         Formal or informal
·         Standard/dialectic/regional language
·         Symbolic or plain
·         Casual/ poetic
·         Magical realism – combines incredible events with realistic details and relates them in a matter-of-fact tone.  – Gabriel Garcia Marquez, Julio Cortazar
·         Stream of consciousness – depicts the random flow of thoughts, emotions, memories, and associations running though a character’s mind. The term ‘interior monologue’ is often interchangeably used with ‘streams of consciousness. James Joyce, Virginia Woolf

Language /Diction – choice of diction/mode of expression is an important aspect of a writer’s style. Writers use different types of words depending on the audience they are addressing, the subject they are discussing, and the effect they are trying to produce.  The connotation of the word is more important than the denotation – strict literal meaning. 
The writer’s tone – the attitude a writer takes toward the reader, a subject, or a character. Tone is conveyed by the writer’s choice of words and details
·         Often a novelist is strongly committed to a certain character or cause in the novel.
·         How does the writer reveal his opinion:
o   Use of rhetoric
o    Emotional prose
o   Calm reasoned argument
·         How does he do this?
o   By the character’s speech and actions
o   Direct comments by the writer in his role as the omniscient narrator
Exercise
·         After you have read a short story think about these:
o   Main character
o   The changes each character undergoes
o   Conflict between characters
o   How the conflict is resolved
o   How the character’s change relates to the theme
o   How the conflict relates to the theme
o   Statement of theme

·         Write a short essay
o   The introduction – usually a single paragraph providing the title, the author, and necessary background. It also includes your thesis statement in which you explain briefly how the theme.
o   The body of the essay is the part where you explain the information you’ve gathered in your exercise 
o   In the conclusion, sum up your major points and add a new thought or a personal response
·         Elaborate – get down to specifics
o   You should elaborate on every general statement you make, using details, examples, and quotations from the stories.

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